Toolkit for Making Written Material Clear and Effective

Toolkit Part 10: 'Before and after' example

This page links to the download for Toolkit Part 10, "Before and after" example: Using this Toolkit's guidelines to revise a brochure.  This part covers the following topics:

  • Introduction
    • Background on the Toolkit
    • About this makeover example
  • Panel-by-panel commentary on the original brochure
  • Changes to be made in revising the brochure
  • Panel-by-panel commentary on the revised brochure
  • Comparing the original and revised brochures
  • Reference list of Toolkit guidelines

To view Toolkit Part 10, click the download listed below.  You are also allowed to save or print a copy of this download from your personal computer.


 

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